For R.E we have been learning about how we are all connected to Purgatory and Heaven. So we were split into 3 groups. One group was the living the second was Heaven and the third was Purgatory. When all of them are formed together they form God.
I am a Year 6 at Good Shepherd School in Auckland. I am in Room 6 and my Teacher is Miss Down.
Tuesday, 30 October 2018
Monday, 29 October 2018
Writng
In Writing, we have been learning to write persuasive piece of writing. We have co-constructed our success criteria together. Here is our introduction criteria checklist.
o Title: Clearly states what you are going to be talking about
Example: Eating Edible Bugs
o Hook: A way to pull your audience in (possibly a rhetorical question, weird and wacky fact or setting a scene).
Example: Are you sick and tired of the same old meal every single night, run out of inspiration for dinner ideas and the family just don’t appreciate your hard work around dinner? Well now you can add the crunch back into your evening meals with interesting and creative dinner ideas.
o Clearly stating what your topic is about / Statement
Example: I believe that everyone should cook with insects.
I believe… I think… I strongly recommend… In my opinion… that all people should eat insects
o Background information: Use broad interest facts
Example: When people hear of others eating bugs they normally screw up their face and say, “Yuck!” But did you know most people who try insects actually end enjoying them. My challenge for you today is to try insect.
o Lead in sentence to your paragraphs (at the end)
There are many reasons why we should eat insects in our diet such as bug are healthy and low in fat, tasty fun treats and you be creative with recipes from all over the world.
o Title: Clearly states what you are going to be talking about
Example: Eating Edible Bugs
o Hook: A way to pull your audience in (possibly a rhetorical question, weird and wacky fact or setting a scene).
Example: Are you sick and tired of the same old meal every single night, run out of inspiration for dinner ideas and the family just don’t appreciate your hard work around dinner? Well now you can add the crunch back into your evening meals with interesting and creative dinner ideas.
o Clearly stating what your topic is about / Statement
Example: I believe that everyone should cook with insects.
I believe… I think… I strongly recommend… In my opinion… that all people should eat insects
o Background information: Use broad interest facts
Example: When people hear of others eating bugs they normally screw up their face and say, “Yuck!” But did you know most people who try insects actually end enjoying them. My challenge for you today is to try insect.
o Lead in sentence to your paragraphs (at the end)
There are many reasons why we should eat insects in our diet such as bug are healthy and low in fat, tasty fun treats and you be creative with recipes from all over the world.
Friday, 26 October 2018
Communion Of Saint's
In Religious Education we have been learning about All Saint's Day and All Soul's Day. In our class we had made a weave talking about Purgatory, Heaven and Earth.
Friday, 19 October 2018
Thursday, 18 October 2018
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